This is my third really good park, it has several roller coasters that are all well theamed, it is well worth looking at. I would really like some responses on the quality of this park, and what I can improve on. You need LL and the Drexler patch. I hope this works. Scroll down for the newest version.

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This park was mediocre at best. More like a track pack then a park, and the coasters were above average. but lets get to the theming, ok the theming AROUND the coasters was okay and you had lots of buildings and some trees, but what about the rest of the park? and the falt rides? you had ZERO. no trees in the areas without coasters. okay those should have been filled with other stuff like shops and rides but if you filled the blank spots with trees this park would look better. its about an average park i'll give it a 5/10

oh things to improve on: theming, more detail, less repetition. trees. remember, no blank spots. coasters in this park were a little dominating, spread them out, maybe 2or 3 less in your next park. flat rides and shops also, you need to have those. buildings that arent just for coasters to go through.

Their are several flat rides and shops but they are underground.

You mean this is a finished park? It doesent look finished to me. But what you have done looks pretty good. The castles look well detailed, and the coasters are very nice (although they are a little to dominating) I suggest you fill in the extra space of the park and re-submit it in this thread, because it does have good potential to be a very good park.

COASTERS- 6.5/10
THEMING- 6/10
LANDSCAPING- 4/10
OVERALL LOOK- 4/10

FINAL RATING- 5.5/10. It is average right now, but like I said, if you fill up the extra space with more coasters, rides, and theming and then re-submit it, than I garentee that people will give you some much better feedback.

I am still working on it, I wanted some opinions so I could make some improvements. Thanks for your opinions. I am going to fill it in with trees, but it takes so much time. I will resubmite a newer version later.

Oh, you didnt mention that you were still working on it. By saying that it could-of decreased alot of confusion.

My suggestions are pretty much the same as TXCoasterGuy's. Try not to make your theming be so repetitive when building along the paths. Also, consider other color schemes for some of your coasters (in this park, darker colors would blend in better with the castles)

Ok this is the newest version.

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see how much trees improve the park? now its alot better. why not enter it in TNPP, see how you do, you have nothing to lose just enter it.

I'm going to do a little more work then enter it.

better hurry contest ends today i think

Very nice. I didn't bother to look at the first one because of what was said, but I see it must have improved! The coasters were well designed and the theming is spread out. Good Job!