My first time trying to build building...Giv me feedback

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hmm its very very good for a first try, but i see several problems. i am trying to help not criticize. okay here we go, this is my opinion only though, the buildings are okay nothing shockingly amazing but nice architecture, use some different siding and roofing here and there, for windows, use the same ghost train, you can build like across the map then delete the sections in between buildings, sometimes thats unrealistic so build a new one, but you obviously didnt have to in this small map. okay and the stalls, o yes the stalls, look ugly by themselves out there in the open. you may like them, but i dont really, use dragons and bury them underground. if you cant do that build land around them and put pathing over the tops, then they are individual buildings or restraunts or whatever. and lastly whats with all the ladder one, chair two, ghost train 7, and jacuzzi 476? well maybe not the last two, but still you dont have to do that, first try to make the two chairs or windows the same ride, if not then have them be two rides name one "WINDOW" and name the other
"WINDOW(space)" that way RCT wont say cant name ride name already used. o well thats it i guess, it looks pretty good all in all.

ok ill take that stuff into consideration...I just did it in a small park becuz it was my first try and i didnt want to go overboard

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I'd say that is VERY good for a first try. I actually dont mind the stalls out in the open that much, but it might look cool if you put them all in the same building, so that it kinda looks like a town block. I liked the detail here also but TXCoasterGuy is right about the ride names. Just do WINDOW and name another one (space) WINDOW, and another (space)(space) WINDOW and so on.

Another thing, it would probably look more like a town if you used yellow, white, purple, and green walls for the buildings. You usually use the brown and grey ones for castle parks, but that doesent mean you cant put some in the town for more variety.

Yeah i know about the WINDOW thing...thanx for the good feedback cuz i think i am getting much better at this game...i fixed the WINDOW thing on my copy...being the origional. Also, i left some stalls out in the open but i enclosed the ones all in one close area

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